Update: I’m making good progress on the revisions to THE IGNORED PROPHECY. I finished the first five chapters and I really like the beginning, now.
In his blog last week, Nathan Bransford talked about writing one-sentence pitches. Since I’m all for anything that promises to make writing queries or synopses easier, I tried my hand at writing one-sentence pitches for my current projects.
BLOOD WILL TELL: (This one is complete and currently seeking an agent.)
Even a suburb of Los Angeles may not be a big enough hiding place when a half-werewolf and a dragon unite to protect an innocent woman from a murderer.
THE SHAMAN’S CURSE: (This one is on the shelf for the moment. It will need some rewriting before it’s ready to go back out.)
When a boy fails to save his friend from a flash flood and earns the hatred of the friend’s father, he can only put an end to the vendetta against him by learning to accept and use his own innate magic.
THE IGNORED PROPHECY: (This is the one I’m currently revising.)
A young man new to magic is terrified when his magic starts doing unexpected things no one can adequately explain and must pull together clues from completely different magic traditions and one very ancient source in order to understand what’s happening to him.
DREAMER’S ROSE: (I just finished the second draft and have a couple of readers taking a look at this one.)
When a demigod succeeds in becoming a god only to find that nothing has prepared him for the challenges he now faces and the results of his own failures, it takes an outcast girl with the ability to enter dreams–even his–to help him make things right.
SEVEN STARS: (On the shelf while I do more world-building.)
When a young man unintentionally unleashes the berserker curse in his blood, he exiles himself from his home and everything he loves forever, until he can find a way to control the berserker fury and, if possible, a cure for the curse.








If I had a dime for every time I came to meredithmansfield.wordpress.com.. Great read.
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Hmmm very nice. A good deal of information in each, but not too long or to rambling. Well done.
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Thanks. It remains to be seen whether any of them help me write or improve the queries, but it’s an interesting exercise.
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