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The second round of final revisions to BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM have gone well, so far.

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Just two more.

The first of those I thought was going to be more extensive. But, on reflection, I’m thinking maybe not. I don’t know that that particular meeting needs more emotion. Not that it can’t be refined a little, but I don’t know that it should be deeper. Although these two characters are half-brothers, they’ve never met before, so I don’t think their emotions need to run really deep–yet. I’m going to give that section another read through and then decide.

The second is a place where another character (not a POV character) really should have an emotional reaction to something and currently doesn’t. But since he doesn’t have the POV, it will only the obvious, external reaction. Well, and the effect that has on the POV character.

So, it’s looking really good to complete these revisions soon. Then I think I’ll let it rest just a little before I start the final polishing edit. I think I’ll spend the time doing some research into launch strategies and see if I can’t give this one off to a better start than the last one. There’s always something new that can be learned and a chance to do things a little better with each book.

First Pass Complete

I’ve finished the first round of final revisions on BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM.

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That included a partial rewrite of a couple of chapters toward the end.

This morning I started going through the comments I still have marked up in the manuscript. At least a couple of them I added myself during the read through. Some of them will be relatively easy once I’ve decided how to handle them. I’ve knocked off a couple of those already. Some will take a lot more thought and a lot more work. At least I don’t need to do another complete read-through for these.

No definitive estimate at this time of how long this phase will take. Most likely before Thanksgiving. Getting closer and closer to the point where I can at least put it up for pre-order, though.

I’m now past the 80% mark in the revisions on BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM.

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Of course that’s only the first round. I’ll have to circle back and work on some of the revisions I couldn’t–or chose not to–complete in this round. Still, with a holiday weekend coming up, I think this round will be done this weekend.

I’ve added a few complexities for my characters to work through and there’s at least one more I may add. And I’ve addressed some things my beta readers found unclear. I won’t know how it all meshes together, of course, until I do the final read-through/polishing edit.

Midpoint

I’ve reached the midpoint of BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM in this first pass of the final revisions.

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Happily for the pacing, it falls at just about the half-way point of the manuscript, too. As a discovery writer, I like to check things like that as I go through the manuscript. The midpoint is usually where some revelation changes the direction of the story. Most commonly it’s where the characters learn something that allows them to move from reaction to action, from defense to offense.

This is also the place one of my beta readers flagged as needing a bigger emotional reaction to that revelation. Since that character is also being hit with a different emotional upheaval at the same time, that’s going to need a good bit of planning. (He’s young enough to think he can hide it from the girl, because he doesn’t want to appear weak to her. Too bad she won’t be fooled. Or, maybe not bad at all, in the long run. 🙂 )

Therefore, I won’t be making that change–or at least not completing it–in this pass. I will be looking for the places where I can bring it out and possibly laying the framework for it. If I want this to really bring this character to his knees–temporarily–and all while he’s trying not to let it show, I’ll need to weave it in seamlessly. If I can make that work, though . . . .

I’ve gotten all the comments from my beta readers marked up in the manuscript of BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM.

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I’m now in the process of a read-through, since I haven’t looked at this story for about a month and a half. I’ll make the easier revisions as I go through and then circle back to make the revisions that take more thought or require more extensive changes. After that, it’ll be time for another read-through, this one for the polishing edit. And then it should be ready to publish.

Done! (For Now)

Yes. I finally finished that chapter of MAGE STORM that has been dogging me for so long.

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And now I can turn my attention back to the final revisions and the polishing edit for BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM.

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I expect to have this one up for pre-order possibly sometime in November. I’ll know better after I really assess the revisions. Most are minor, but there are one or two that will need deeper thought–and maybe more work. And publish it either the last week in December or the first week in January.

That timing isn’t random. First, a new book just won’t get a lot of attention between Thanksgiving and Christmas. People are busy with other things. But at least some readers will probably get gift cards or new e-readers for Christmas. Also, I’ll have those two weeks off, so I can spend more time than I’m usually able to managing the new release.

And, as soon as the polishing edit is done, it’ll be back to work on MAGE STORM. Hopefully, with a better idea of why I was feeling so stuck before, so I can make better progress. After all, it’s a rewrite. I know how the story goes.

That is, unless one of those characters who didn’t have a point of view before but do now was trying to pull me off in a different direction and that’s why I was so stuck. Hmm. Pesky characters.

I’m a day late in posting. (I try for Wednesdays and Sundays.) But that’s because yesterday I was actually writing that chapter in MAGE STORM that’s had me stuck for so long.

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It’s not quite finished, but it’s very close. I expect to have it done soon–by the end of the weekend at the latest–and then I can set it aside for a while and turn back to the final revisions on BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM.

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(Huh! Just now noticed that I’ve got ‘storm’ in both titles.)

I don’t really know–yet–what’s held me up on this chapter. Usually when I face this much resistance it’s because something in the back of my brain knows there’s something wrong, that I’ve taken a wrong turn somewhere. Hopefully, I’ll figure it out by the time I’m ready to come back to it.

At least I know I’ll be more productive on the revisions to BECOME: TO RIDE THE STORM.