First, an update: Last week I blogged about e-publishing. SFWA’s Writer Beware has a very informative and realistic article about e-publishing on their blog. Plenty of food for thought. I’ll be interested to see the next installment.
Over the last week, especially, I’ve been working on refining the query and synopsis for MAGE STORM. I’m almost happy with the query:
The only traces of magic left in Rell’s world are the violent, semi-sentient mage storms made up of the ashes of the magic-wielders killed in the great war.
At least that’s what Rell believes until a mage storm infects him with magic he can’t control. The magic ebbs and flows with his emotions, protecting those he cares about one day and starting fires the next. His only hope of returning to a normal life is to find someone who can help him learn to either control the magic or get rid of it.
Rell follows rumors of a teacher but instead finds a cult leader, Trav. When Rell witnesses the death of another student, he realizes he’s next on Trav’s list. Forced to flee, Rell can’t forget the friends he left behind. Somehow, he has to learn enough to return and free the others.
That is, if Trav doesn’t catch him first, because Trav doesn’t let anyone with real magic live long enough to challenge him.
I’ve also started my research and developed an initial list of agents. In the next few days, I’ll take a deep breath and start submitting MAGE STORM to agents. Fingers crossed.
I like your query. It grabs my interest and I definitely want to know more of the story. Good luck with submitting it to agents. I will keep checking back to see what happens.
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Thanks.
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This is great Meredith! You have come so far with this, and this is concise, interesting and contains the main conflict. Good luck with your queries!
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