The first critique of WAR OF MAGIC has come back–earlier than I expected.
And it’s given me some things to start thinking about.
There are some slow spots. Not really surprising. What to do about them . . . well, that’s part of what I’ll have to think about. Some things are necessary to the plot, so cutting them isn’t really an option. Finding a way to spice them up might be possible, but will require thought.
Some things aren’t clear enough. That’s easier to deal with.
And some things might need to be expanded a little.
The climax worked, so that’s a relief.
I’ll let these things turn over in my mind while I wait for the other critiques.
Meredith Mansfield, Author 
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