BECOME is flowing much better now with the new structure.
I’ve completed three new chapters and started a fourth since coming back to this one with a new structure. I’m really liking it a lot better, too. This time, I really believe the story is going to work.
Now, you’ll have to excuse me while I get back to this slightly awkward scene–awkward for my characters that is.
Happy Independence Day
Meredith Mansfield, Author 
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