I am now nine chapters from the end of this round of revisions on WAR OF MAGIC.
Unfortunately, this is a new chapter. Maybe. I’m not real happy with it so far. I might change my mind.
The idea is twofold.
Some of my critique partners had some questions about the lead up to the final battle. And this chapter would give me a chance to answer them. Also, one critique partner didn’t like me taking a few paragraphs to set the scene for the battle before it began and this chapter would let me do that, too, ahead of the battle.
Like I said, I’m not happy with it yet.
Once I get over this hump, though, I’ll be on the downhill slide for this revision. The only things left will be to review the beginning and then the polishing edit. So, that’s progress even if it sometimes doesn’t feel like it.
Meredith Mansfield, Author 
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