Hard at work on BECOME.
Right now, I’m rewriting a chapter. Since I’d originally started trying to tell this story chronologically, the chapter was written from the point of view of the main character. But now that I’m allowing the story to be nonlinear, it really needs to be told from the brother’s POV.
This means that I need to write a completely new scene (or more) as well as rewrite the main scene from a different perspective entirely. Some of that is going to be a bit challenging to write. Because the main character is about to do something that makes sense to him, but which his brother thinks is totally insane. (And . . . he could be right, at least a little.)
This should be fun.
Well, the advantage of the changing POV is you can let the reader in on things that the main character isn’t aware of. It’s good for creating conflict and particularly suspense.
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In this case, I hope it will show the brother’s reversal from rival to ally much more clearly. Also, of course, it helps to set up for when he (secretly) changes back.
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I’ve had to do that. It usually makes the scene better. Good luck!
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Hopefully.
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That’s the spirit! Lol…
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