In the world of BECOME, magic and religion are inextricably linked–which probably makes sense. After all, BECOME is loosely based on the Greek myth of Hercules. So, in this story, all magic basically comes from the goddess. (Note: There are other gods in this world, but they aren’t important to the story. In fact, so far, only one other has even been referenced: a mountain god. And, for reasons that are made clear early in the story, none of them are likely to be the source of magic–at least not in the same way.)
In Greek mythology, Zeus had quite a few children with mortal women. Since I’m turning the story on its ear, in this world it’s the earth goddess who has a few children with mortal men. And, to each child and his or her descendants, she gives a magical gift. And that’s the source of all the magic in this world.
Since he’s the ‘Hercules’ in this story, Gaian’s gift, of course, is strength. Although, it will eventually become clear that there’s a purpose behind that particular gift, that will come to fruition in his descendants.
Meanwhile, as I try to work out exactly how the next couple of very important scenes need to go, I’ve been doing a little more work on the cover art for BECOME. When I’ve finished, I think I’ll like this version:
Much better than the original image:
I’d tried lightening this image up–and I may lighten the blue version, too . . .
But it still felt a little too monotone for my tastes. Besides, it’s always best to modify the stock image in some way so that this book doesn’t end up somewhere right next to another one with the same exact cover image. (Yes, I’ve actually seen that happen.)
What do you think?
I would try brightening the “galaxy” behind the hand rather than the whole image. I like the blue.
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Yes. I could brighten just certain sections. Still playing with it. 🙂
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I find the blue background much more striking, although I did like the patches of colour in the original. Could you combine these? I would also try playing around with the hue/saturation of the hand, now that it’s against blue rather than brown. In your original cover the colour of the hand worked against the sky’s colour, but there might be a more striking colour/tone contrast you could use for the new background.
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I liked the patches of color, too. That gets a little tricky, but I’ll play around with what I might be able to do to re-incorporate that.
Hmm. I played a little with the contrast in the lighter area of the background. Hadn’t played with the hand, though. Worth a look.
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