Posted in writing, tagged critiques, e-publishing, fantasy, Multiple Projects, revisions, rewrites, sequels, series, writing on May 25, 2016| Leave a Comment »
Second or third pass, depending on how you count. At any rate, I’ve reached the point where continuing to fuss with the WAR OF MAGIC manuscript right now is more likely to do harm than good. Sometimes it’s important to know when to quit–at least for a while.
It’s time for it to go out to my beta readers next week.
And time for me to get back to work on the rewrite of MAGE STORM.
Posted in writing, tagged audio book, e-publishing, fantasy, Learning, series, writing on May 22, 2016| 2 Comments »
Celebration. The process of making an audio book of THE SHAMAN’S CURSE has officially begun.
New world for me, but I’m really excited about this.
Posted in writing, tagged critiques, e-publishing, fantasy, revisions, sequels, series, Young Adult on May 18, 2016| Leave a Comment »
I finished the first pass of revisions on War of Magic.
I moved a chapter and added/revised a little around it to tie it in better to the rest of the story.
Now, for the second pass, I’m trying to address all those annoying little notes I left myself in the first draft. And there is at least one place where I’ll need to write a new scene or two. Something I skipped over in the first draft.
Aiming to have this out to my beta readers at the beginning of June.
Posted in writing, tagged critiques, e-publishing, fantasy, revisions, sequels, series, writing on May 15, 2016| Leave a Comment »
For me, the first revision pass is mostly about trying to read through the manuscript as much like a reader as possible.
To read in a matter of a couple of weeks what took me months to write. Of course, it’s never quite like a reader would, because:
Still, I am trying to go through it as quickly as I reasonably can, to get a feel for the pacing and find any little inconsistencies that crept in over the time it took to write the first draft.
In the case of WAR OF MAGIC, I’ve also been slowed down by trying to fill in some of the gaps I left in the first draft. Places, mainly, where I knew I needed something, but I just didn’t have a clear enough picture of it in my head. And didn’t want to halt progress on a first draft that had already taken longer than I expected to figure it out.
I’m roughly three-quarters through that first pass. I’ll still have some of the notes I left myself in the first draft–and a few I’ve made in the first round of revisions–to go back and deal with before it’s ready for my beta readers.
Still trying to aim for a September release, though it may be late September.
Posted in writing, tagged boxed sets, e-publishing, events, fantasy, Learning, marketing, revisions, sales, sequels, series, writing on May 8, 2016| Leave a Comment »
So, last week’s promotion was the first time I’d tried a free promotion. Here are the results:
For THE SHAMAN’S CURSE:
I gave away 914 copies, including books in two markets I’d never “sold” to before–Italy and Japan. Now, if only a quarter of those continue on to buy THE VOICE OF PROPHECY, BEYOND THE PROPHECY, and (eventually) WAR OF MAGIC, that will have been well worth it. Especially if they go on to leave reviews.
I’ll have a better idea how well this worked by the middle of next month, when the royalty report for May comes out. Of course, that won’t be complete. I’ve certainly downloaded a free book–or two–and not gotten around to reading it immediately.
BY SWORD, TALE, OR MAGIC didn’t fare quite as well, even at three books for $0.99.
Only 15 sales. Still, hopefully those are new readers of my work. Hopefully they’ll go on to read some of my other books. Or at least leave a review. BSToM doesn’t have any reviews, yet. (Which may be part of the reason it didn’t sell better.)
Posted in writing, tagged boxed sets, e-publishing, events, fantasy, marketing, Multiple Projects, revisions, rewrites, sequels, series, Special Events, writing, Young Adult on May 4, 2016| Leave a Comment »
And also the Flinch-Free Fiction sale by Clean Indie Reads.
THE SHAMAN’S CURSE is free during this sale.
And BY SWORD, TALE, AND MAGIC is only $0.99.
In other news, I’ve finished that new chapter for MAGE STORM and I’m turning back to the revisions on WAR OF MAGIC.
Posted in writing, tagged e-publishing, events, fantasy, marketing, sales, Special Events on May 1, 2016| 4 Comments »
Two of my books will be part of the Clean Indie Reads sale starting on May 4th. (May the Flinch-Free Fiction be With You!) You really should check out the sale.
Meantime, BY SWORD, TALE, OR MAGIC is already on sale for $0.99.
That’s three young adult fantasy novels for less than a dollar: FIRE AND EARTH, THE BARD’S GIFT, and DAUGHTER OF THE DISGRACED KING.
And THE SHAMAN’S CURSE will be free for five days starting tomorrow.
Free can make sense for the first book in a series.
So, if you’ve never read anything of mine, now’s the time.
Posted in writing, tagged characters, e-publishing, fantasy, Multiple Projects, Point of View, revisions, rewrites, sequels, series, writing on April 27, 2016| Leave a Comment »
I’m at the first point in the rewrite of MAGE STORM where I’ve decided to add a new chapter from a different point of view. Not a new character, but one that never had a point of view in the earlier version of this story.
Changing POV characters, especially early in the story, always slows the writing down. It’ll be worth it in the end, though. This way, the reader will get a chance to really understand what motivates this important character. Not just what she tells her friends, which isn’t exactly false. Just . . . not complete.
I want to get this chapter (or two) done before I go back for my second look at WAR OF MAGIC.
Posted in writing, tagged e-publishing, fantasy, first drafts, Multiple Projects, Real Life, revisions, rewrites, sequels, series, Writer's Block, writing on April 24, 2016| Leave a Comment »
Not yet. But as of next week, I’ll have three writing projects in process.
The first revisions of WAR OF MAGIC,
which will be my primary project. The rewrite of MAGE STORM. And the first draft of BECOME.
That should be interesting.
Both BECOME and MAGE STORM have been significantly delayed by a whole lot of real-life administrative stuff I’ve had to deal with lately. It’s not writer’s block, but it almost might as well be. Hopefully, I can get that all out of the way before it’s time to get serious about revisions on WAR OF MAGIC.
Posted in writing, tagged e-publishing, fantasy, first drafts, Multiple Projects, rewrites, series, writing on April 20, 2016| Leave a Comment »
Sometimes, while working on Project B (BECOME),
the exact idea I need for Project A (MAGE STORM) percolates to the surface. And generates new excitement.
Now all I need is the time.
Meredith Mansfield, Author 